This story completely captivated me. I loved the way you delved into the character’s mind, portraying their tension and dilemmas so vividly. It made me reflect on the power of emotions and the decisions that shape us. Thank you for sharing it!
Brenda, this piece absolutely gripped me from the very first line. 🙏🏼The way you built the tension — weaving memory, guilt, fear, and relief — was breathtaking. It’s chilling, yet beautifully written, and it really shows another powerful side of your voice. I would definitely love to read more of your psychological fiction ..you carry the weight of thriller writing with such depth and atmosphere.✨
Brenda: this story caught me up in so much detail relating to past events in my life.
Your writing took me back to similar incidents in my young working life as a student and as a qualified medical professional working at Groote Schuur Hospital
I just watched a British series called Fear which has a chap terrorising his neighbours and telling lies about them to the police.
I recently found my diaries from my junior high through college years. As I read through them, I find myself talking to that girl I used to be. Sometimes laughing, sometimes crying.
This story completely captivated me. I loved the way you delved into the character’s mind, portraying their tension and dilemmas so vividly. It made me reflect on the power of emotions and the decisions that shape us. Thank you for sharing it!
Thanks for your reply. It means so much😊
Thank you very much for your great writing🙏❤️
Brenda, this piece absolutely gripped me from the very first line. 🙏🏼The way you built the tension — weaving memory, guilt, fear, and relief — was breathtaking. It’s chilling, yet beautifully written, and it really shows another powerful side of your voice. I would definitely love to read more of your psychological fiction ..you carry the weight of thriller writing with such depth and atmosphere.✨
Hi Dora. Glad you liked it. And I appreciate your feedback. 💞I certainly will be writing more like this. 🌸
I like it…the over all story was too good ….perverts like him should be caught and punished like this!
Wow. Powerful and fabulous.
Thank you 😊
Nicely done, I loved it.
I think you should write a novella, you are that good
Brenda: this story caught me up in so much detail relating to past events in my life.
Your writing took me back to similar incidents in my young working life as a student and as a qualified medical professional working at Groote Schuur Hospital
I just watched a British series called Fear which has a chap terrorising his neighbours and telling lies about them to the police.
I love this, Brenda! This is definitely a new side of your writing and I like it! : )
I recently found my diaries from my junior high through college years. As I read through them, I find myself talking to that girl I used to be. Sometimes laughing, sometimes crying.