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Checking in on you Brenda. I’ve had 3 weeks of health struggles but I’m still here. Are you still on your visit to France?

Kindest regards and the deepest respect

Carol Power

Johannesburg

South Africa

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This chapter breathes.

Not just with story, but with place — dust, fabric, ritual, hierarchy, silence. You don’t describe the Vleisfees as an event; you let it function as a living system where belonging, power, gender, memory, and skill quietly negotiate with each other.

Blaze is especially strong here. Her competence is never theatrical — it’s practical, embodied, earned. The way she moves with Rascal feels less like control and more like mutual recognition. That line — “Don’t lead him. Invite him.” — carries the whole chapter’s ethic.

I also appreciate how you let women’s labour and pride stay visible without commentary: the jam, the dresses, the order of things, the dignity in preparation. Nothing is rushed, nothing is sentimentalised. The tension lives in what’s not said — in glances, timing, and restraint.

This doesn’t read like nostalgia. It reads like memory that still knows how power works. I’m looking forward to how Blaze’s inner awareness develops once schooling begins — something tells me she won’t fit neatly into any structure for long.

Thank you for the patience of this chapter. It trusts the reader — and that trust shows.

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