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Wildwood Writer's avatar

This chapter pulled me right in. The tension, the tenderness, the cold, and the stakes all feel so real. Beautiful storytelling.

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Brenda - A Voice that Wonders's avatar

I appreciate your comment. Thank you so much. It is great to receive such lovely feedback. ❤️

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Wildwood Writer's avatar

You’re welcome ☺️

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Hina Gondal's avatar

Interesting and excellent 👍

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Phillip Slater's avatar

This continues to be fabulous. I’m fully invested in Blaze and her life.

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Brenda - A Voice that Wonders's avatar

That is gold to me. Thank you. Your support means so much to me. ❤️

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Storm Whisperer's avatar

Really great read again Brenda.

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Brenda - A Voice that Wonders's avatar

Thank you so much. I love the comments as it helps me gauge how my story is received. 🌸

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Dora's avatar

Beautiful , Brenda !❤️

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Brenda - A Voice that Wonders's avatar

Thank you Dora. Your support means the world to me. Hope you are well. 🌸

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Dr. Michael Napier's avatar

Great work keep it up.

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Brenda - A Voice that Wonders's avatar

Thank you! 😊 Appreciate your comment.

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Brenda - A Voice that Wonders's avatar

Thank you! 😊 Appreciate your comment.

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I and the Butterfly's avatar

Nice work, Brenda! :)

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Martine 🦋's avatar

I love this story Brenda... reminds of my favourite uncle ( he sadly passed) who had a sheep farm and how I loved spending time there.

And with the Afrikaans/ Dutch words in it, the special girl, her father..... warms my heart ❤️

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Brenda - A Voice that Wonders's avatar

Thank you Martine. I can imagine your time on the sheep farm. I love the Karoo. It is such a beautiful place.

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