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Gary Mucklow's avatar

This is vivid and eerie Brenda, capturing one man’s final, chilling moment in the ruins of humanity. The sensory detail pulled me into Rock’s confusion and fear.

Nicely done.

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Brenda - A Voice that Wonders's avatar

Thank you Gary. Appreciate your comment. 😊

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Gary Mucklow's avatar

Always 🙏

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Caroline Beuley's avatar

Great story!

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Brenda - A Voice that Wonders's avatar

Thank you.

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Caroline Beuley's avatar

Loving these post apocalyptic prompts!! I’m going to try them myself!! Thank you!

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Hina Gondal's avatar

It was so moving so beautifully written!

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Brenda - A Voice that Wonders's avatar

Thank you.

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Rea de Miranda's avatar

Your writing makes it seem real. Well done, Brenda!

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Brenda - A Voice that Wonders's avatar

Thanks Rea 😊

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Brenda - A Voice that Wonders's avatar

Thank you. 😊

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Lia's avatar

Sci-fi horror…I’m absolutely loving this! Your writing is compelling and keeping me on edge! You will continue writing this right? 💖

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Brenda - A Voice that Wonders's avatar

Oh wow. Thank you. I have not been into sci-fi but doing these prompts has actually been so good. Perhaps I will introduce a monthly Sci-Fi write. 😅❤️

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Lia's avatar

Why not? Sounds like a great idea! I’m all for it, keep them coming!💖

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