I found a shall hole thy can fix easily. "Yes. And now I have to show it. Those photographs, it’s everything I have.” Jack’s hand clenched on the paper cup beside him. “I didn’t touch Arthur, but they made it look like I was the one who killed Arthur.”
Jack's hands were cuffed to the table. You can easily fix or explain how that was possible. Other than that, very good.
Dear Brenda, did you see that I sent you a direct message? I don’t want to bother you, if you don’t want to answer, that’s absolutely okay, no pressure, please! I’m only asking in case you didn’t see it. Or did I make a mistake? And you can’t see it? xxx
Whoa! Very good read and I like the pieces all going together.
Thank you. Your response means the world to me.
Is a good story. I liked it.
I found a shall hole thy can fix easily. "Yes. And now I have to show it. Those photographs, it’s everything I have.” Jack’s hand clenched on the paper cup beside him. “I didn’t touch Arthur, but they made it look like I was the one who killed Arthur.”
Jack's hands were cuffed to the table. You can easily fix or explain how that was possible. Other than that, very good.
Thank you! 😊 appreciate that. Proofreading one’s own work is difficult. Thanks for the spot.
Compelling and atmospheric. You excelled at immersing me into Jack’s bleak hopeless world. Great twist.
Thanks for sharing.
Thank you for your comment. ❤️
I enjoyed this tremendously, Brenda! I couldn’t stop reading. The ending is brilliant. Wow!
Sorry for the late reply. Thanks for your comments. 😊
This is absolutely brilliant. I never saw the twist coming. There’s definitely a book here.
Thank you. That’s what my hubby said. 😊
Dear Brenda, did you see that I sent you a direct message? I don’t want to bother you, if you don’t want to answer, that’s absolutely okay, no pressure, please! I’m only asking in case you didn’t see it. Or did I make a mistake? And you can’t see it? xxx
I replied dear Camilla. Let me check. 🌸