Brenda, this is extraordinary. You don’t just describe vertigo — you embody it, make the reader feel it tightening their own chest. The way you turn fear into a living shadow is powerful. Thank you for giving it a voice, and for letting us glimpse what it’s like to carry it.
I felt myself in every single word Brenda, you made it so real! I, too, have a fear of heights and I cannot tell you how much I hate that feeling! I could almost feel it breathing near me…
Brenda, this is extraordinary. You don’t just describe vertigo — you embody it, make the reader feel it tightening their own chest. The way you turn fear into a living shadow is powerful. Thank you for giving it a voice, and for letting us glimpse what it’s like to carry it.
Josh thank you! That means so much.
Oh yes! You nailed it. I love how you describe it, so familiar to anyone who knows. Excellent writing💜
Thank you! I am so glad that you saw what I was describing. 😅
I simply loved this powerful description of your fear, I completely get it, even though I don't have it myself! A giddying read.
I am so glad you enjoyed it. 😊
This is brilliant, it illustrates to the ways anxiety manifests and lives with us.
This is related to my fears! Relatable
I have this even looking down from my second floor flat balcony. My partner is supportive and kind about it which means the world to me
Excellent! Loved reading this.
Wow, Brenda! This is a visceral write. I could feel the fear. Well done!
This was so good, I’m staying at ground level for the rest of the day.
Thank you Phillip. Yip ground level is best 😅
I felt myself in every single word Brenda, you made it so real! I, too, have a fear of heights and I cannot tell you how much I hate that feeling! I could almost feel it breathing near me…