What I loved most was how human the story felt in the middle of all that dread. Little bits like “Flipping Flop!” and the thought that maybe there was an emergency and they’d just forgotten to clear the loo, those small, almost funny reactions gave such a real voice to the narrator. It made the creeping silence and terror something I could empathize with.
What I loved most was how human the story felt in the middle of all that dread. Little bits like “Flipping Flop!” and the thought that maybe there was an emergency and they’d just forgotten to clear the loo, those small, almost funny reactions gave such a real voice to the narrator. It made the creeping silence and terror something I could empathize with.
Thank you. I appreciate that. 😊🌸
Excellent work for Day 1’s prompt here, Brenda! I love the narration and how it captures the panic and dread that sets in as the story goes on.
The rising tension was excellent as well. My heart was racing by the end!
Thank you kindly 😊😊 As long as Lord Devourer had his fill 😅