Me, you and "you".
I got chills reading this one. 😎
At first, I thought it was just a guy ranting about his crappy day and traffic—but then that “voice in his head” turned out to be real.
It felt so raw, like a confession from someone teetering on the edge of madness.
That ending, where he shreds the blood pact and fades away himself—wow. It’s like sin and salvation getting erased at the same time.
Wow… thank you. 😅
WOOOOW😮💨😮💨😮💨😮💨!
Well done!🤙🏻
Love this so much, Brenda.
Thank you
Goodness gracious, Brenda! This was a wild ride!!
🤣🤣 It was fun to write. A bit on the wild side I agree. ❤️
I love this side of you!
Wow, what a wild ride! The tension, the inner dialogue, and the way past and present collide is incredible. I love how chaotic and vivid it feels, like I am right there in the protagonist’s head. Absolutely gripping.
Thank you! It was fun to write 😅
Absolutely brilliant. Slowly built towards its conclusion and also contains an important message about karma and the impact of drink driving.
Thank you😊
I got chills reading this one. 😎
At first, I thought it was just a guy ranting about his crappy day and traffic—but then that “voice in his head” turned out to be real.
It felt so raw, like a confession from someone teetering on the edge of madness.
That ending, where he shreds the blood pact and fades away himself—wow. It’s like sin and salvation getting erased at the same time.
Wow… thank you. 😅
WOOOOW😮💨😮💨😮💨😮💨!
Well done!🤙🏻
Love this so much, Brenda.
Thank you
Goodness gracious, Brenda! This was a wild ride!!
🤣🤣 It was fun to write. A bit on the wild side I agree. ❤️
I love this side of you!
Wow, what a wild ride! The tension, the inner dialogue, and the way past and present collide is incredible. I love how chaotic and vivid it feels, like I am right there in the protagonist’s head. Absolutely gripping.
Thank you! It was fun to write 😅
Absolutely brilliant. Slowly built towards its conclusion and also contains an important message about karma and the impact of drink driving.
Thank you😊