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I and the Butterfly's avatar

Very ingenious and fun! I love this! Thank you! :)

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Hina Gondal's avatar

So beautiful🫶🏻❤️

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Brenda - A Voice that Wonders's avatar

Thank you.

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Rea de Miranda's avatar

Love your wordplay, Brenda. It sounds like a rhythmic song!

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Brenda - A Voice that Wonders's avatar

Thank you Rea. So appreciate your support. ❤️❤️

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Phillip Slater's avatar

I felt the rhythm of this as I read it. Nice work Brenda.

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Brenda - A Voice that Wonders's avatar

Thank you Phillip 😊

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C.J. Heck's avatar

Now THAT is word-play at its very best! I congratulate you! Whoo-eee, don’t try reading it out loud in the morning before your first cup of coffee!

Well done, Brenda

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Brenda - A Voice that Wonders's avatar

Thank you CJ.

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C.J. Heck's avatar

You’re welcome

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P.N. Is Johnny Moon/WOGPodcast's avatar

I know who I am coming straight to, when I need help with rhyming my poetry. lol. Amazing work on this Brenda, as always.

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Brenda - A Voice that Wonders's avatar

You make me smile. That took a while - but enjoyed. Thank you for the feedback. Always welcomed.

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Ink and Light by Nat Hale's avatar

this made me smile, thank you

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Brenda - A Voice that Wonders's avatar

Thank you for commenting. I love feedback and a smile on your face is what I needed to hear. 😃

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Brenda - A Voice that Wonders's avatar

Thank you…. ☺️ That spell lingers😅

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