This is a haunting and beautifully crafted piece. The atmosphere builds slowly, tightening like the gears of the clocks themselves. The imagery feels ancient and alive, filled with quiet dread and reverence. You’ve captured the essence of cosmic horror through something deeply human, the fear of time slipping beyond our control. The line “We knew then we had not summoned Time. Time had been waiting.” lingers like an echo, both chilling and profound.
So good Brenda. 😊
Thank you 💞
This is a haunting and beautifully crafted piece. The atmosphere builds slowly, tightening like the gears of the clocks themselves. The imagery feels ancient and alive, filled with quiet dread and reverence. You’ve captured the essence of cosmic horror through something deeply human, the fear of time slipping beyond our control. The line “We knew then we had not summoned Time. Time had been waiting.” lingers like an echo, both chilling and profound.
Thank you. I so appreciate your comment. 🌸
You’re welcome
You've written it so amazingly 👌👌 Stunning 👏👏😇
Oh…. Wow. Thank you. 😊❤️
My pleasure😇
This is a really cool, really intriguing idea for a horror, very Twilight Zone
Thank you. 😊
Most welcome