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PancakeSushi's avatar

This should have more attention on it. The structure and rhyme scheme are refined, elegant; the subject profound. The conclusion is breathtaking. Fantastic

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Carol Ann Power's avatar

Good morning, Brenda.

I love this poem of yours so very much.

Thank you for expressing so succinctly just what I feel about life and choices and circumstances and making the best of our precious lives.

Kindest regards and respect

Carol Power

Johannesburg

South Africa

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