This should have more attention on it. The structure and rhyme scheme are refined, elegant; the subject profound. The conclusion is breathtaking. Fantastic
Beautiful poem. I have been thinking a lot about doorways and thresholds and how each ending leads to a new beginning. Here is my latest poem, hope you’ll give it a read. I appreciate the support. 🙏🏼
This should have more attention on it. The structure and rhyme scheme are refined, elegant; the subject profound. The conclusion is breathtaking. Fantastic
Thank you. That is praise indeed. Humbled ❤️
Not at all
Good morning, Brenda.
I love this poem of yours so very much.
Thank you for expressing so succinctly just what I feel about life and choices and circumstances and making the best of our precious lives.
Kindest regards and respect
Carol Power
Johannesburg
South Africa
Thank you sweet Carol. So appreciated 💞
I think this would fit the upcoming coffee with Zahra if interested
https://substack.com/@zahravehyl/note/p-177369810?r=6iknin&utm_medium=ios&utm_source=notes-share-action
Oh I would love to feature this poem in your upcoming coffee with Zahra.
Added. You are tagged for when it releases :)
Thank you.
Just lovely, Brenda 💜
Thank you. 😊
Beautiful work 👏♥️
Thank you 😊🌸
Doors to lead us away, and to our destiny.
Beautifully written, Brenda!
Thanks Rea… oh yes we face many doors. ❤️
That's the life itself on it's path 👌👌👌Stunning writing 👏👏👏
Thank you PM. That blesses me!😀
It's my pleasure 😊 You're amazing.
Just beautiful Brenda 🫶🏼
Thank you Simona ✨
Life’s journey, one door at a time. Loved it.
Thank you Phillip - that means so much. ❤
Beautifully written. I shed a few tears.
Karen thank you, that is try validation that my poem touched you.💖
Wonderful. ❤️ I love how every door leads us to where we are today.
Thank you! I so appreciate your comments.💖
Thank you for the restack. 🌸
I guess I should keep moving through every door I can. So many adventures.
Beautiful poem. I have been thinking a lot about doorways and thresholds and how each ending leads to a new beginning. Here is my latest poem, hope you’ll give it a read. I appreciate the support. 🙏🏼
https://open.substack.com/pub/fairiesandgnomes/p/seeker?r=19igav&utm_medium=ios
Beautiful!
Your words are doors that open wide,
Leading us to depths inside,
A journey through life's ebb and flow,
With every line, our hearts glow.
Thank you for sharing your art,
A gift that touches the heart. 💗